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model- Brookie Cookie
thanks a lot for the "critiques" which I would have to say aren't really "critiques" Just a bunch of comments regarding how "statged" it looks. If you don't like, or don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all.
The photo is the way it is. the colors, the composition, and the "bags that hurt peoples eyes" are the bags that we had, and what we went with. If you think it's not good enough, just move on, please
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ImpactThe shot is a little overexposed, especially on the models hair (also on the top right corner). I'm not sure if that happened when you actually took the photo or in post-processing, but it's definitely something to be cautious of. It looks like you may have tried to burn it a little bit, but overexposing gets rid of all the detail in that area and there is no way to fix it in processing.
The suitcase pattern is a little overwhelming, I would have suggested a solid colour unless the suitcase was the main subject of the photo. It detracts from the model otherwise, the white dots look like some mind trick. I do like how you've composed the photo in that the train tracks lead off into the upper right corner and her pose is very intriguing. Definitely more staged than natural as a few people have pointed out, but I still like her positioning. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)" /> The focus is very nice as well, good bokeh in the trees. I hope I've helped you out!