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August 30, 2009
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Runaway Girl by onixa Runaway Girl by onixa

model- Brookie Cookie

thanks a lot for the "critiques" which I would have to say aren't really "critiques" Just a bunch of comments regarding how "statged" it looks. If you don't like, or don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all.
The photo is the way it is. the colors, the composition, and the "bags that hurt peoples eyes" are the bags that we had, and what we went with. If you think it's not good enough, just move on, please :heart:
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LCAGraphics Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
I really love it! Great picture!
Akeema Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually really like this one but the only thing I have to comment on is the fact that the yellow kind of blurs everything. If you took out some of the yellow it would probably look a lot better and her blond hair would stand out more.
x-Darkwhisper-x Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
This is a very nice photo, great colors and lighting! I think it only looks staged because the model is looking straight at the camera. Maybe if she had been looking away, it would seem less staged.
Soul-music354 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
I adore it... the colors, the concept, the model, simply - amazing. I <3 it.
feelicious Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009
this is so wonderfull! (:
the light, composition just everything! :)
mas84d Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the bag :) I don't understand why the are critics who hate it. I do believe that there are a few imperfections, but these are the ones that makes this picture to feel alive. Just because a picture follow the "rules" doesn't mean it will be beautiful.
gromit098 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the composition and the contrast of the bag and the background :)
Horoholikka Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
what the hell? i LOVE the bags!! D: gimme!

i really like the sot, and the sun omg! such a sunny day! the light is awesome : D
lothlaer Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
i personally love everything about it: the lighting, her super cute jacket, the bags, composition, everything! dont listen to haters =P
Midnight-Rush Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
I like this, though I do agree it looks a little staged, but it works well in this image, it communicates a concept. The bag I have no problems with, overall its a nice portrait, the composition is good and the model is beautiful. However, I do think it is a little overexposed. But other than that, nice work.
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