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Runaway Girl by onixa Runaway Girl by onixa


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model- Brookie Cookie

thanks a lot for the "critiques" which I would have to say aren't really "critiques" Just a bunch of comments regarding how "statged" it looks. If you don't like, or don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all.
The photo is the way it is. the colors, the composition, and the "bags that hurt peoples eyes" are the bags that we had, and what we went with. If you think it's not good enough, just move on, please :heart:
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:iconlcagraphics:
LCAGraphics Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
I really love it! Great picture!
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Akeema Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually really like this one but the only thing I have to comment on is the fact that the yellow kind of blurs everything. If you took out some of the yellow it would probably look a lot better and her blond hair would stand out more.
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x-Darkwhisper-x Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
This is a very nice photo, great colors and lighting! I think it only looks staged because the model is looking straight at the camera. Maybe if she had been looking away, it would seem less staged.
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Soul-music354 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
I adore it... the colors, the concept, the model, simply - amazing. I <3 it.
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:iconfeelicious:
feelicious Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009
this is so wonderfull! (:
the light, composition just everything! :)
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mas84d Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the bag :) I don't understand why the are critics who hate it. I do believe that there are a few imperfections, but these are the ones that makes this picture to feel alive. Just because a picture follow the "rules" doesn't mean it will be beautiful.
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gromit098 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the composition and the contrast of the bag and the background :)
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Horoholikka Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
what the hell? i LOVE the bags!! D: gimme!

i really like the sot, and the sun omg! such a sunny day! the light is awesome : D
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lothlaer Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
i personally love everything about it: the lighting, her super cute jacket, the bags, composition, everything! dont listen to haters =P
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Midnight-Rush Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
I like this, though I do agree it looks a little staged, but it works well in this image, it communicates a concept. The bag I have no problems with, overall its a nice portrait, the composition is good and the model is beautiful. However, I do think it is a little overexposed. But other than that, nice work.
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racheltham Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
Love the idea, I wish there was a 'like' button on here like there is on facebook;p.
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Jayfeather3 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
¡No parece efectuado en absoluto! ¡De todas formas, la iluminación es apenas perfecta, y amo ese bolso! :D
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jaazjazuh Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
love this. i don't think it looks staged :|
i don't think you should listen to those who think it is.
this is gorgeous just like all your other shots >.<
(:
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femketje Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Professional Photographer
awesome shot, love it :D
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AndyGarcia666 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wonderful shot! i love the colors and the model is very pretty
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enragedlemur Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
Beautiful!

Slightly too bright i think
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Airveia Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student General Artist
I love the extension of the leg that makes us look at the luggage, and the lighting. I also like how we can see her toes on the tucked-under leg so it doesn't look cut off.

The bag might be a little too contrasting but I like it, because it attracts your eye and the leg leads to the subject. I hope that made sense?
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Honey-Bunny713 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009   Photographer
I really like this photograph. I love the lighting and the contrast. I really think this could also be a advertisement too. For what I'm not sure. But I really like the rail road and that she is on it. Good work. I am also really happy to see you are doing other stuff than macro. Your macro's are good, I just like to see diversity.
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sujamie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
she's adorable
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javoec Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
clool
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:iconkim8970:
kim8970 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009   Photographer
Nah. Overly-staged or not, looks gorgeous! :love:
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onixa Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Professional Photographer
"overly-staged" ?

thanks
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kim8970 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009   Photographer
See ~FourOneSeven's comment?
He says others mentioned this looks "overly-staged".
But I love it if that means anything to you :] :heart:
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FourOneSeven Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
I really dig the lighting and composition- but- like others have mentioned- this looks overly-staged. It doesn't really communicate 'running away' to me... That said, the technical aspects of the shot are really well done and executed. Hope this helps!
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Asura-Kumara Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
Nice.
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omoimasuyo Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
I love the look here. I think she should have been looking away to give that feel of "wanderlust".

the colors are awesome, though :)
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floggerSG Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice shot. That suitcase hurts my eyes!
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TheOnlyWarman Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Professional General Artist
polka dot travelling bags, interesting
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HelloImAnn Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
Very beautiful.
:aww:
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Sunday-7th-May Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
She is very beautiful =)
I love the lighting =D
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Phaedrus-42 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
she might get run over by train :lol:

The tones are great... could have looked more spontaneous :nod:
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gloomy-scratch Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
looks too staged... like the lighting. bad content imho.
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:icononixa:
onixa Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Professional Photographer
well then go find something else to critique if you don't like it :)
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gloomy-scratch Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
thats very immature of you. you ASKED me to critique. and if you dont want any negative feedback dont ask people for critiques, say: complements only.
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xXevilangelXx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
have you ever heard that critique is supposed to be at least a bit constructive? explaining the bad and good sides of how something is done? saying it looks staged is not critique and if you can't be constructive and grounded you really should go somewhere else :)
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gloomy-scratch Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
nope im sorry but you're just wrong. saying that it looks staged is a critique, and if you dont want honesty maybe YOU should go somewhere else. honestly... >_>
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xXevilangelXx Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
saying it looks staged is just saying it looks so
a critique is explaining why so, how does this makes the whole photo look like, why is it bad, how it would be better; so the artist could understand how to improve the thing that he/she got wrong
but anyway, i really don't feel like arguing with you, it's pointless
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gloomy-scratch Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
if you cant figure out why it looking staged is bad and how to fix that then you shouldnt be here. it looks staged because a person carrying luggage would never sit on train tracks. you could fix that by removing the luggage or changing the scene. i felt the compisition was bad because it looked unbalanced. hence the word composition.
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MirkyJedi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Professional Photographer
"It looks staged because a person carrying luggage would never sit on train tracks"
Bull! You have no sense of imagination.
I, for one, LOVE this photo! :)
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xXevilangelXx Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
oh, really? i don't think that i'm the one who shouldn't be here >.<
anyway, i won't argue more with you, it is completely pointless
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